tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1715730660525886887.post3449228148881809788..comments2009-12-25T10:27:58.966-10:00Comments on Grey: ch1 pg 2-4Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1715730660525886887.post-76580403976289722712009-12-24T06:54:41.427-10:002009-12-24T06:54:41.427-10:00Glad you find it interesting.
Interesting about th...Glad you find it interesting.<br />Interesting about that line. I almost changed it. I wanted to substitute father for "daddy."<br />I think originally, I did not reveal the narrator's name untii much later. In fact, I tried to write the whole thing without giving him a name. I found it impossible with all the dialog. It just didn't read right.limomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392808188162372410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1715730660525886887.post-2846407329333004012009-12-23T23:43:14.480-10:002009-12-23T23:43:14.480-10:00Enjoying the story so far. I loved the lines that ...Enjoying the story so far. I loved the lines that said: "Daddy said I could always count on Darling. Sorry, I mean Mister Darling." Great hint at an attitude on her part, I thought.parlancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11175843064324380048noreply@blogger.com